Wednesday, November 27, 2013
Stop! It's (almost) Grammar Time
It's just about that time of the writing process where we begin editing.
One way I recommend going about editing your papers is to take them to the University Writing Center (in the library). They're super apt at finding all your wonderful spelling, punctuation and usage errors, so give them a try!
One other thing we'll be doing in class is having Mini-Lessons on pesky grammar skills that I've noticed (by reading your papers of course) you might be having trouble with. For extra credit, why don't you volunteer to teach the class about one of these? Your lesson will have to include 1. An explanation of the rules and 2. an activity to reinforce it with the class. You should expect to spend between 10-15 minutes. Volunteers who successfully present a "Grammar Time" lesson will receive 5 points to their final grade. It's pretty generous, I know.
Up for grabs:
MWF Classes
Monday December 2nd
1.Then vs. Than
2. Identifying and Correcting Run-On Sentences
3. Properly Using Quotation Marks
4. Their, There, and They're (Oh my!)
Wednesday December 4th
1. Using Semi Colons
2. To, Too, and Two
3. You're vs. Your
4. Apostrophes
I will be taking attendance these days for a grade, so be sure to be in class!
Friday, November 22, 2013
Portfolio Requirements
Folks:
All portfolios are due on Wednesday, December 4th. This will be our last day together ::cue tiny violin music::
Your portfolio is hefty. It's a big piece of your grade (60%!). Be sure to go a good job with it.
Your portfolio must include:
1. Graded copies of stages 1-5 with my comments. If you've misplaced my comments, then instead of including this, you'll need to write a one page reflection on your revision process (what you've changed and why) for each missing paper.
2. Your original Stage VI -- of course, without my comments. This will be your pre-peer review version.
3. Revised and edited copies of stages 1-6.
4. Your public document for stage V
Please be sure you're turning in polished work. At this point, I will be looking at grammar, spelling, punctuation, and formatting in addition to content. Many students have asked if MLA formatting is required. The short of my answer is "yes" -- UNLESS you have a reason for not using MLA. For example, if, throughout the semester, your writing has been focused on a science discipline, you may choose to use APA instead. Maybe your essays are all about how MLA ruined your life D-: in which case, it would make sense to use something else.
So in other words, if you don't use MLA, be sure to articulate WHY you've made the rhetorical decision not to.
How you decide to present this information to me is entirely up to you. As long as it is presented in a way that your audience (me!) can easily make sense of your work, you'll be in good shape. Is turning in a big pile of crumpled/unstabled and messy papers audience centered? I'm thinking no.
You are being graded on the quality of your finished product and the rhetorical effectiveness of your writing.
May the force be with you! Make it so! For Durotar! Engage!
Wednesday, November 20, 2013
Stage VI Thoughts
Our last essay of the semester!
Aren't you excited? Yay.
Stage VI is all about thinking back through your journey as a writer in 1301. Of course, look at the writing assignment deets tab for more information, but once you've done that, here are the four things I'll be looking for when evaluating your papers:
1. Narrative -- How does the essay illustrate who the author was as a writer coming in to 1301? Does the narrative address the struggles/difficulties of the course, or lack their of? How did the author overcome their struggles?
2. Vivid Details -- The key to a successful stage VI is all about specifics. How does the author incorporate specific detail into their essay? Do they quote specific readings? Give examples from class discussion? Refer back to their essays?
3. Discourse -- How does the author situate their development as a writer within the greater discourse of writing studies?
4. Significance -- How does the author articulate the significance of their development and journey? What was the outcome of it all, and why is it important? What does it mean for their future as a writer/student/person in the world?
And if that's not enough direction, wouldn't you like to see an example?
Example of an A paper, though, of course, this is only one of a million different ways to earn an A on this assignment.
Friday, November 22nd is our work day. No formal class, but you're welcome to bring a draft by my office for feedback.
Your first draft is due on Monday, November 25th. Bring 3 copies to class.
Revisions will be due in your portfolio.
Aren't you excited? Yay.
Stage VI is all about thinking back through your journey as a writer in 1301. Of course, look at the writing assignment deets tab for more information, but once you've done that, here are the four things I'll be looking for when evaluating your papers:
1. Narrative -- How does the essay illustrate who the author was as a writer coming in to 1301? Does the narrative address the struggles/difficulties of the course, or lack their of? How did the author overcome their struggles?
2. Vivid Details -- The key to a successful stage VI is all about specifics. How does the author incorporate specific detail into their essay? Do they quote specific readings? Give examples from class discussion? Refer back to their essays?
3. Discourse -- How does the author situate their development as a writer within the greater discourse of writing studies?
4. Significance -- How does the author articulate the significance of their development and journey? What was the outcome of it all, and why is it important? What does it mean for their future as a writer/student/person in the world?
And if that's not enough direction, wouldn't you like to see an example?
Example of an A paper, though, of course, this is only one of a million different ways to earn an A on this assignment.
Friday, November 22nd is our work day. No formal class, but you're welcome to bring a draft by my office for feedback.
Your first draft is due on Monday, November 25th. Bring 3 copies to class.
Revisions will be due in your portfolio.
Friday, November 8, 2013
Presentation Schedule
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| I love how the teacher has a mustache. |
Next week, we will be presenting our Stage V public documents. I am taking attendance on these days for a grade, so be sure to come! And don't be late because it's rude. I will give you a mean look and possibly a kick in the pants (and/or a zero). Below is our schedule:
MWF 7:45
Wednesday November 13th
Eva
Karisma
Karina
Eliana
Art
Sergio
Stephanie
Friday November 15th
Zable
Vanessa
Abigail
Iris
Jonathan
Francine
Guillermo
Monday November 18th
Paolo
Maleny
Mari
Gustavo
Ricardo
Alex
Adrian
MWF 9:45
Wednesday, November 13th
Victoria
Rachell
Michael
Sarrah
Kaitlynn
Juan
Gareth
Friday, November 15th
Linette
Benjamin
Javi
Julio
Sylvester
Eddie
Tomas
Monday, November 18th
Max
Melissa
Flavio
Alexis
Savannah
Crystal A
Daniel
Edson
MWF 11:45
Wednesday, November 13th
Loretta
Roemello
Alejandra R
Leslie
Alejendra O
Vanessa
Jose
Melissa
Friday, November 15th
Edna
Brittany
Erick
Paolo
Amber
Christian C
Christian A
Monday, November 18th
Karol
Jennifer
Marlyn
Brennen
Alfredo
Nereyda
Bryan
Some of you all were looking for examples of past Stage V projects, so here are a few.
Experienced Readers and Writers Block Youtube Video
Writing Perspectives Blog
A Prezi About College Professors' Expectations
Rhetoric, Yay! Prezi
Rage Comic
For extra credit, offer an analysis and evaluation of one of the projects in the comments section!
Monday, November 4, 2013
Thoughts on Stage V
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| Be like business cat! Think outside the box. |
While we're "away" from class, feel free to discuss your Stage V projects in the comment box below. Pose questions, get reactions, seek advice. If you provide helpful advice to a peer, as per always, there is extra credit to be earned.
On that note, I know some of you are wondering and weary about the grading procedures for Stage V. There are three elements to your Stage V project
- Your Public Document (5 points possible)
- Your Reflective Essay (5 points possible now, 5 additional when turned in with the portfolio at the end of the semester)
- Your Presentation (5 points possible)
Lemmie break it down for you.
For the "Public Document" you'll be graded on this scale:
Rhetorically Smart (Full five points -- document demonstrates an awareness of audience, purpose, and form. It is also complete and polished)
Rhetorically Aware (Four Points -- document demonstrates an awareness of audience, purpose and form, but is either unfinished/unpolished, or could have been approached in a more effective manner).
Rhetorically Average (Three points -- document is missing one of the crucial elements -- audience, purpose, context!)
Rhetorically Dull (Two Points -- document is missing two elements! and/or is unfinished/sloppy)
Rhetorical Fail (One point -- you know where this is going)
For the Reflective Essay:
This is your chance to prove to me how rhetorically smart your document is. There are a few ways to approach this:
1. A cover letter as a guide to your public document explaining all of it's rhetorical awesomeness
2. An essay that articulates WHY your public document deserves an A
3. A narrative explaining how you came about the idea for your project, outlining your decisions and why you made them.
But of course, these are only suggestions.
Here are the questions I'll be asking myself while grading. You can think of these as peer review questions if you'd like to get feedback from a partner (or me!):
1. How does the author describe the public document in their essay? There should be enough detail to get an idea of what is being described.
2. How does the author address the document's purpose? In other words, why was the public document created? Does the author give reasons for choosing this purpose?
3. How does the author address the document's audience? The audience should be a specific, targeted group of people. Are there any secondary audiences? How are they addressed? Does the author give reasons for choosing this specific audience?
4. How does the author define rhetorical effectiveness, in relation to their document? How do they justify their choices as a author in terms of genre, form, content, etc?
5. How does the author bring research (inquiry) into their discussion of their document? A works cited page should also be included.
This is the loose rubric I'll be using when grading your reflective document.
And finally, the presentation:
1. Does the presenter effectively use their alotted time?
2. Does the presenter communicate with the audience? (I.e -- voice, body language, tone, etc)
3. Content of the presentation -- does the presenter go in depth in describing their document? How do they explain their rhetorical decisions to the audience?
As I mentioned in class, during the alotted "work days" I'll be in my office, available to look at drafts or bounce ideas off of. The following are our alotted work days and the times I'm available in my office (ARHU 269). My hours are 8am-11:30am
Friday, November 8th
Monday, November 11th
Come visit me. Bring a draft! Or food. :-3
And one last reminder:
Feel free to comment here to get help from your classmates!
ADDED IN: Extra point to the first person to find business cat's typo :-X
Friday, November 1, 2013
Rhetorically Smart?
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| Are YOU Rhetorically smart? |
Let's take a look at some video examples. Do you think these are rhetorically smart videos?
http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-2220675/Gangnam-style-Georgia-congressman-John-Lewis-stars-latest-parody.html
http://youtu.be/o6G3nwhPuR4
http://youtu.be/o6G3nwhPuR4
Your assignment:
Find an example of a public document with an audience similar to your
own and write an analysis of it. How might you use what you learned from
this analysis in your own plans for Stage V?
If you need some more direction, feel free to address the following questions:
- What made you choose this particular document?
- Who was the intended audience and how could you tell?
- What was the purpose of the document? How successful do you think the document was in reaching its purpose?
- What does it get "rhetorically right?"
- How does it fail?
- What can YOU take away from this document when creating your own?
Due Friday, November 8th (We won't be having class on Friday, so bring your response by my office between 8am-11:30am. If you'd like to turn it in on Wednesday and not worry about it, that works, too).
In addition, please review the Stage V assignment as we will be discussing it in more detail on Wednesday.
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